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When I close my eyes, I definitely can see you there Although the sharpest knife slice my heart, I absolutely can feel you are here She came at the grey ray Feels my pain, with her lovely touch In a silent of the remnant cry She whispered, ‘nobody can hurt you anymore’ I’m like a Prince in the winter land There are a mount of snow wherever I see But one part of my self that will never cold, Is my heart that is devoted to the perfect lee. Commentary… Hi Dimas. I don’t know that you are such a poetic person. I like the way you choose your words to express your feelings. I also like the figurative language you use such as the simile, the personification, etc. Keep up the good work, Dim! - Lissa